In its nearly
three-century history the United States has had a dramatic impact on
history. It has had a lot of direct
impacts on human events, such as its direct involvement in military action, foreign
aid, and economic interests worldwide; is has also had many indirect effects as
well. Overall the United States has created a legacy of
leadership and hope that will endure in human history for generations to come.
The
U.S.’ direct intervention in many events around the world has enormous
consequences, and perhaps the most consequential of these actions is one which
involves the military. The U.S’ involvements
in wars over the past two centuries have often changed their courses, and its
starting of some of them have far-reaching consequences on history. An example of the former type of action was
the recently-ended War in Iraq. The
United States began the war due to concerns about weapons of mass destruction
that Iraq allegedly possessed, and because of the possible consequences that
could arise from them. Although few
weapons were recovered, programs to produce them were still in place. Had the U.S. not intervened, Iraq could have
resumed its production of possible weapons, which could have had disastrous
consequences for the world. Another
example of the influence of the U.S. is seen in World War II. During World War II, it was the U.S. using
nuclear weapons that brought a relatively quick end to the war. The only other option that was being
considered was Operation Downfall: an all-out invasion of Japan, which would
have cost many lives and resources. The U.S.
decision to use atomic weapons brought a quick surrender and a relatively clean
end to World War II, which otherwise could have caused much more damage to both
sides of the conflict.
Another
large area where the U.S. plays a large part in history is in foreign aid. The aid that the United States provides to
countries around the world greatly influences the course of human history. During the years of fighting in World War II,
Congress passed the Lend-Lease program, which allowed the President of the U.S.
to give aid to foreign countries to help further the war effort. This had two large consequences; first, it helped
a financially-struggling Britain to keep up in the war, and second, it
eliminated the United States’ policy of neutrality that it had worked hard to
keep running. This would set the stage
for later involvement in the war, which was critical in its outcome, as stated
above. After the war ended U.S. aid
continued as the reconstruction efforts in Europe began, and played a key role
in helping to rebuild a shattered Europe.
A third
example of the U.S.’ impact on history is in its economic power. As the United States controls more than a
fifth of the global GDP, and is also the largest importer of goods in the
world, the effect that its actions have on the economics of the world is
immense. One example of the U.S.’ effect
on imports is the case of oil, which is the key export of many Middle-Eastern
countries. Because these economies are fueled by our need of the oil, our economy affects these countries’ decisions
to a great degree (an example of this is the 1973 Oil Crisis). Besides imports, the U.S.’ exports also have
a large effect on the world’s economy.
Because the U.S. is the second-largest importer of goods in the world,
the countries that it chooses to give goods to will benefit much more than
those that it doesn't. This will have an
great impact on which countries will play larger roles in the world economy,
which in turn has a large impact on the course of human history.
Overall
the U.S. has served as a leader in the world on many fronts, such as the
economy, aiding countries around the world, and military intervention. It has served as inspiration for many countries
around the world with its archetypal “rags-to-riches” history, and has
inspired many of them to follow in its footsteps to their own independence. By spreading freedom around the world it
inspires others to seek their own freedom; women, the lower class, and the
unfortunate all heed this message. In
trying to create a better world for all, the U.S. has a great impact on human
history.
I thought this was overall an very well-written essay with lots of great evidence. The organization was very clear and easy to understand because your topic sentences stated what was to come. However, I think for the conclusion, it would help to tie it together with the entire essay and only the points you discussed throughout your body paragraphs because it does not focus as much on independence compared to other issues you mentioned. You had great evidence and clear organization.
ReplyDeleteMichael, I thought this was a very clear, concise analysis of US history to defend the point you made. It was easy to read because of your thoughtful organization which was appreciated, because you had a lot of information to give in not a lot of words. I got a little lost in the historical evidence however, but you caught me again with your conclusion. I would have liked to read more about the archetypal "rags to riches" stories and the effects those have had on us, and therefore on everyone we have helped, but other than that I thought your conclusion was good, and it was convincing, which is its entire purpose anyway so good job. I liked how you separated it by the different categories of historical evidence you had, so your point was clearly outlined, but like I said before, don't forget to restate why you're giving the evidence you're giving in your essay. All in all I found it informative and concise.
ReplyDeleteI liked the organization of your ideas into three subtopics of military, foreign aid, and economy. Your specific examples such as the Lend-Lease Act and World War II greatly strengthens your argument by adding evidence. You do a great job explaining that the U.S. has an impact on human history, but it is not as clear what type of impact. Is the impact a positive one or a negative one? Are there multiple viewpoints? For example, you state that the use of atomic weapons in WWII ended the war "relatively cleanly." Japan probably remembers that day as one of its saddest days in its history. Is this a positive or negative impact and why?
ReplyDeleteMichael, I love the ideas in this essay. It is true that the US has had an enormous affect on world history because of some of the choices it has made. I like how you used the subtopics of military, aid, and economics rather than just focusing on military. While the military has done a lot, the US has affected world history through economics almost just as much, it's just less obvious. The only thing I think could be better is your introductory paragraph, where you fall into the "many things" trap a couple of times and aren't really as specific as I'd like. I have some questions. About the economic effects on human history, do you think that the importing of oil actually works the opposite way? Rather than the United States controlling the Middle East by being an importer, is the Middle East controlling the United States by being its largest exporter?
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