It is
the U.S’s aspirations to be a leadership society that propels the country to
achieve great things. Throughout history, the U.S has adapted new ideas, and
has used their resources to their advantages, being the most technologically
powerful nation in the world. Technology is one of the resources that make a
country move forward. The U.S has used their knowledge to achieve things that grabbed
the rest of the world’s attention, and making an impact in history.
The
Americas in the 15th and 16th centuries was a land of
opportunity for those coming in from European countries in search for fortune,
discoveries, resources, or fleeing from religious persecution. Many immigrants
settled in North America, finding that the bountiful lands were suitable for
agriculture, survival, and the ability to trade. By the 1700’s, autocratic rule
from Great Britain started creating tension with the colonists to the point
that a revolution was sparked – starting with the colonists demanding
independence from Britain. The birth of the U.S was significant because of the
new ideals of democratic principles was essential. The U.S Constitution was by
The People for The People, starting the path for the U.S to hold dear the
concept of democracy, which other countries do not. This country did go through
difficulties, especially with the fundamental question of what to do with
slavery. The bloody Civil War had to be fought between the North and the South
to determine the direction the U.S would have to take with slavery, but in the
end, the North won and slavery was ended, which was the right thing to have
happened to make the U.S a truly democratic country.
Then,
the industrial age happened. A lot of inventors blossomed in the United States,
making their marks in history, such as Thomas Edison, inventor of the light
bulb, and Alexander Graham Bell, the inventor of the telephone and combustion
engines spawned entire industries known to Americans, such as Henry Ford, who
were able to mass produce mechanical vehicles that transported things across
the United States. Modern industrialists
also made their mark, taking advantage of modern inventions.. The U.S used
modern ideals to make an impact in history by using technology. During the
advent of World War I, the U.S made strides in technological development,
especially in military hardware. Airplanes, such as those invented by the
Wright Brothers, assumed great importance in battle. After WWI, the economy was
good, but the excesses in business caused greed and manipulation of the free
markets. This led to the Great Depression in 1929, due to the crash in the
stock markets. The entire U.S was affected, putting many people in poverty. It
took good leadership from President D. Roosevelt to put in place “The New Deal Plan,”
and regulations that slowly got the country out of this economic downturn. By the start of World War II, the military
complex in the U.S was in the position to create arms for their allies in
Britain to fight Nazi Germany. Developments
in warfare were made in areas such as weaponry, industrial production,
medicine, and communications and intelligence. It was all this advanced
technology that helped the U.S. win WWII. When the U.S entered WWII, its
military capabilities would be tested on the early onset of war. Through
successful strategy and industrial advantage, the United States, with her
allies, turned the tide against the Axis powers and was able to defeat them,
thus winning the war. One of the advances the U.S made during WWII was nuclear
weaponry – unfortunately, the impact the U.S made in history with this is that
she is the only country to have deployed nuclear weapons against another
country.
After
WWII, the Soviet Union and the United States were challenging each other on
outer space exploration. It was a race between the USA and the USSR. Determined to show Russia what America was
capable of doing in the field of space exploration, President Kennedy issued a
challenge that the U.S would send a man to the moon and be back safely before
the end of the decade in 1961. In just 60 plus years, astronaut Neil Armstrong
was the first human to be able to fly in an aircraft and walk on the moon. The
United States’ aspiration to literally reach for the stars made the U.S an
accomplished, technologically advanced country. Her actions and democratic ideals in the past
is what makes the U.S the country it is today.
Great Job! You were able to incorporate really important facts throughout your whole piece. However I would consider revising how dry the essay is. Still keep your facts quick and to the point but try to spice it up a bit. That way you command the readers attention throughout the whole piece. I really liked the timeline formate that your essay was presented in. This made it really easy to follow how the US impacts the world throughout many generations. Also you did a very good job by always stating where the US has impacted. This makes it very clear to the reader what events in history you are talking about. As an informed person on America's impact, do you think that the impacts that were made in the past are more or less significant than the impacts that are being made right now?
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your essay pertaining to the impact of America on history, and since I wrote about the same question it was interesting to see how we interpreted the question differently. The piece flowed very smoothly, without losing focus, and you diction was flawless. My only point of criticism would be to focus your piece around a more central idea about how the U.S. has impacted history rather than giving a timeline of events and showing how the U.S. has affected these events. With this being said, in your opinion, what is the overarching theme that make the United States have such a large impact on history?
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a very informative, well-supported essay that clearly outlined some of the ways America has impacted history. However, I agree with Matt that you could have improved the organization by picking a central theme, such as technology or democracy. Also, it's clear from your essay that in being a world leader in technology and democracy, America has impacted history—but how, exactly? Many non-Americans (and perhaps even some Americans) view America as greedy capitalists who destroy the environment and meddle in world affairs thanks to their overly inflated view of themselves. Do you think America's impact on history is for better or for worse?
ReplyDeleteGreat job on all of the historical facts, I can tell you put a lot of effort into finding all these facts! I like how you flowed from one idea to the other by using a timeline. I like your varied syntax and how you methodically present your facts in an organized fashion. However, I would suggest that you relate these facts to the impact America had on history. It might be just me but it seems your concluding sentence differs from your thesis because you say these events are what makes the U.S the country it is today in the concluding sentence but in your thesis, you seem to use the facts to show how the U.S has made an impact on history. What are your personal opinions on America's impact on history? Do they have a large or small impact and what are your views on America's impact? How exactly, does technology play such a key role in the U.S's impact on history?
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