David Papp
The Impact of the US on Human History
America
has risen from the tiny Puritan settlements whose survival was at times
doubtful to become a nation of unprecedented power and influence over
the globe. With its founding and lead of sophisticated technologies that
link even the most distinct parts of the world, the US revolutionised
the rate of technological growth and communication. Despite foreign
criticism of American extravagance, America’s standard of living and
apparent happiness has resulted in a worldwide attempt to imitate the
American lifestyle of hard work and opportunities. People abroad are
gradually and subconsciously creating mirror images of the American
Dream. This revolutionised ideology is replacing the traditional and
more social oriented cultures and setting the world on a capitalist path
focused solely on wealth.
The
scientific powerhouse of the world, the US has essentially restructured
the world into a vast matrix of communication. By encouraging the
world’s brightest minds to work here since the dawn of the scientific
era, the US created an unparalleled environment for innovations as
significant as computers, space research, and the World Wide Web. These
technologies have revolutionised communication: rather than the months
it takes for news to deliver from Asia to America, it’s a mere
millisecond in the digital age. The impacts of such powerful
communication are innumerable, from global exchange of languages to
being able to share one’s favorite links on social network sites. They
have knitted the distinct minds of the world into one omnipotent brain
with endless information. Consequently the rate of technological growth
has become exponential for the first time in the course of human
history: the total number of patents in the last decade has been more
than in all years prior, and cancer research hopes to achieve more in
the next decade than it has in the last fifty. While some might argue
that this spark in technological growth wasn’t America’s doing but
rather an inevitable process, the fact that the US pioneered most
significant technologies and controls most of them now indicates
otherwise.
Perhaps
even more important than the rate of growth of communication is the
psychological impact of the US. When mentioned to a foreigner, the US
does not invoke the same images of liberty, patriotism, and beauty as it
does to a US citizen. Instead, the reaction is generally negative, with
comments on how greedy, selfish, extravagant, and egocentric Americans
are. Nevertheless, even the greatest critics acknowledge an awe for the
legendary power and wealth that appears to stem from capitalist gambles
and equal opportunities in America. Europeans have long held their motto
“Live to work, not work to live,” but as America does just the opposite
with its endless number of stressful office jobs and complaining
workers and yet still appears to be happy, people intuitively gravitate
towards the American example. The impact is already visible: a general
trend towards fewer vacation days in Europe, more impersonal business
worldwide, and higher financial aspirations for individuals.
Consequently the social life characteristic of Europe is deteriorating
as people obsessively focus on their careers and see potential
competition in their peers rather than seeing potential friends. As an
example, while drive-thrus are common in the US as food here is viewed
as a mere necessity and time drain, restaurants and coffeeshops in
Europe are an integral part of social life. They provide social
environments for friendly discussions. With the increasing influence of
American lifestyle, drive-thru restaurants are coming to dominate the
world and social life is in a decadence as people are no longer finding
the time and purpose to enjoy each others’ company in traditional
restaurants.
If
the price of the American Dream is so substantial, many wonder why the
globe is slowly but surely adapting American lifestyles. With its
greater income per capita, superior services, and lavishness, America
presents incontrovertible indications of financial success that are
tempting to anyone. Through the course of evolution, humans have become
naturally geared towards competition as necessary for survival. Since
measures of financial success are more concrete than measures of moral
success or perceived happiness and ensure better “survival,” people
sacrifice other aspects of their lives, such as social and family time,
just to obtain these. Furthermore, wealth and power hold the grandest
status that allows people wielding them to belittle those who do not,
which provides a significant incentive for people to obtain wealth and
power. Since the US has both significant wealth and unrivalled power,
it’s understandable that foreigners seek to imitate the US in hopes of
achieving the same.
The
United State’s impact extends beyond the obvious globalisation and
unprecedented technological growth to a psychological molding of
nations. Inspired by the wealth and status of the US, foreigners pursue
the American dream of social mobility through hard work and
opportunities, but in the process lose their traditionally social
societies and become slaves of their work.
Very nicely done! Your essay flowed very well from paragraph to paragraph, and is very clearly focused from one to the next. The organization is good, and I like how you used a variety of sentence types to carry your message. I agree with your point that people are trying to recreate the American dream for themselves, and that the U.S. is the leader in the new world, but I’m not sure if I agree with your point regarding the gradual decline in social life that comes with the U.S. lifestyle. If that is true, where are people now getting their social stimulation, since people are not all socially deprived as the existence you suggest would describe?
ReplyDeleteDavid, your essay is excellently structured and supported! I found your argument interesting and convincing, and I liked how you didn't just focus on major historical events, but also included general trends of longer workdays, more drive-thru restaurants, etc. that are closely connected with modern life. I sort of agree with Michael that you may have over-exaggerated the social cost of pursuing the American dream—it's true that Americans are seen as greedy and egotistic, but don't they also have a reputation for being social, perhaps even to the point of extravagance? Also, social mobility is not the only defining characteristic of today's America. How do you think the much-publicized American traditions of democracy, freedom, equality and justice have influenced human history?
ReplyDeleteThis essay is extraordinarily well written, especially with lots of substantial evidence to back up your points. Your argument, like Alice said, was well constructed and quite persuasive. But I am curious, if people are constantly working towards the American Dream and never stopping for "life",then is there really an american dream to work towards? Is the american Dream just working to live? I think because of America's great amounts of success from all of the worldwide contributional projects, we have unrealistically high expectations for our own personal success, striving us to work hard and be the best we can be. Is it possible to lower these expectations? Is it really possible for there to be another America? A place where all of the great minds can come together peacefully? These are questions that you neglected to answer. Otherwise, great work.
ReplyDeleteHaving also written about the US's impact on history, I know the difficulties of getting one's point across, but you handled it very well. You make some good arguments that demonstrate a high level of knowledge about American trends and the effects of them on other nations. The thoroughness with which you approached the topics was great, the analysis of the psychological aspect of American influence and addition of qualifying statements really strengthened the essay. You talked alot about modern issues and the predicted course of certain trends into the future; perhaps you could have elaborated more on how things were in the past in order to put emphasis on how American influence brought about change and the impact that had on history.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading the essay. It's really good, and the flow feels very natural. You present some wonderful ideas that only someone that has lived in both Europe and America would probably think to notice. I like how you presented the motivations for people around the world to sacrifice some aspects of their culture for Americanization. I agree with Erin that it would have been nice to have some past events in this essay, as the question is "the impact of the US on human history", and US history includes hundreds of years of impact on the world. However, I agree with Alice that it was nice how you didn't just focus on things in the past but presented your argument in things whose effect is tangible on us today, like the spread of fast food. Also, do you think that the American lifestyle of focusing a lot on work is one of the things driving the rise of fast food in other countries? Because if one part of American culture spreads, it makes sense that interrelated ones spread together in a big change in culture.
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