A Promise Is a Promise
“Drive_thy_business, let_not_that_drive_thee”
-Benjamin_Franklin_from “The_Way_to_Wealth”
“What do you mean you switched suppliers
without my consent? You better have a good reason for bypassing me, the CEO of
this company. Explain yourself, Director Patterson.”
“It is only for one or two months, Chairman
Johnson. Our company is in a financial crisis. If we are not prudent, it can be
catastrophic. The board and I decided that the best way to save our budget is to
temporarily switch to a lower-quality but much cheaper supplier. I stress that
it is only temporary until we can get ourselves out of this crisis.”
“What’s wrong with the budget? It was tight
the last time I saw it.”
“While you were recovering from the brain
surgery, the news of the car accident and your state of coma leaked out to the
press. Stock prices plummeted, the board was a mess....this was the only way I
could persuade the board to give us time. We are running on a bare minimum from
the sale profits of our bakeries. If we are to secure our company’s future, we
must cut our costs. The best method is to save money on our flour costs. By
reducing the quality of flour, we can save $570,970 per week.”
“Send me a copy of the company account file
and I will look over it tonight,” I sighed in frustration.
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As I sat in the leather chair of my
marble-tiled study, my mind was at war. “It’s only for a month or two,” said
CEO Johnson. “It is a month or two,” said Moral Johnson. “No
one will notice the difference between grade A flour and grade B flour. Even if
they do, you can deny it until the month is past,” argued CEO Johnson. “You will know,” Moral Johnson pointed
out. “Think of the company. Think of the employees. If your company goes
bankrupt, 1173 employees will be out of a job,” said CEO Johnson. “But don’t
you remember what this company means to you? It is the culmination of your
ideas and values,” countered Moral Johnson. “Exactly. Do you want to jeopardize
all of that?” demanded CEO Johnson. “Look around you,” he added. I scanned my
room slowly. Behind me was a whole wall full of books on majestic bookcases. On
my left spanned the 20ft window that seemed to let in the full moon and the
shimmering black pond in my yard. I could see the faint outlines of the iron
fences bordering the outskirts of my estate. In front of my wooden desk were
black leather sofas with enough room to sleep on. I couldn’t help noticing the
tall, gleaming wooden doors that led to the rest of my house either. “Do you
remember the amount of effort it took to get here? Is a temporary quality
reduction really worth all of this? Do not do something you will regret,”
commanded CEO Johnson. I could no longer see or hear Moral Johnson through the
comfortable sofas, majestic desk, and beckoning doors that crowded my mind.
“Sometimes, it is necessary to make sacrifices for the greater good,” I
decided. “I cannot endanger this company and its 1173 employees.” With this
resolution, I crumpled up the pages of the financial status report and headed
toward my bedroom.
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“BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!” rang the alarm clock.
Moaning, I slowly opened my eyes and forced myself out of the bed. After
splashing some cold water on my face, I put on my crisp suit. While tying my
tie, I checked my watch: 5:30 AM. “I guess I have enough time to get some
breakfast on my way to the company,” I thought. “I’ll stop by the Honest John’s
Bakery store down the street. It’s been a while since I’ve tasted our bread.”
Smiling at the thought, I got into my car and drove down the street.
When I got to the bakery, I quickly parked my
car and walked in. As I entered, the yeast-scented warm air enveloped me. I let
myself relax for a moment in the serene and unworldly atmosphere that only
fresh bread could produce. I quickly picked a fresh blueberry scone and got in
line behind a woman with a child around ten years old. As I was going over my
speech justifying my decision to accept the reduction, I could not help
overhearing the conversation between the cashier and the woman.
“Hello, my name is Jason. How may I help you
this morning?” asked the cashier.
“Could you please ring these up for me?”
asked the woman.
“Sure ma’am,” said Jason. While ringing up
the pastries, he casually remarked, “You’re up bright and early this morning.” Smiling
at the little boy, he asked, “Aren’t you tired?”
“Nope! I’m hungry!” answered the boy
confidently. Chuckling, the mother added, “We always come to this store in the
mornings for our bread. We both agree that your bread tastes the best.”
“Well, I am glad you do,” said the Jason. Pointing
to the engraved wooden plaque on the wall behind him, he proudly quoted, “We promise the best ingredients, the best
taste to our customers.” “We’ll never let you down ma’am!” Upon hearing my
motto, the company’s motto, I felt Moral Johnson stir quietly within me. Smiling,
Jason put the items in a bag and handed it to the boy. “Enjoy!” he added. I
quickly followed suit and drove to the company, lost in deep thought.
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Director Patterson came into my office
promptly at 7:00 AM. “Hello, Chairman Johnson,” he said politely.
“Hello, Director. Please, sit down,” I
answered.
“So Mr. Chairman, have you decided?”
“Yes, I have,” I answered.
“And your decision is?” he asked expectantly.
“Immediately return this month’s shipping and
restock our stores with the normal grade A flour,” I commanded.
“Sir, I wish to know why,” said the Director
in an exasperated voice. “I believe I had made the seriousness clear. We simply
don’t have enough money!” he said, trying to restrain his frustration.
“I originally agreed with you. I thought that
it was sometimes necessary to sacrifice for the greater good. I believed that
switching qualities was the best way to ensure the happiness of the 1173
employees as well as the security and continuity of what we had built so far in
this company…”
“Exactly!” interrupted Director Patterson.
“However, this morning I realized the truth.
Our company, Honest John’s, brings happiness and rightful pride in its
employees through the quality of our bread. Secretly reducing the quality of
our flour is like robbing them of their dignity.
“It is only temporary! By turning a blind eye
for two months, we can buy time to get ourselves in a better situation!” said
the Director.
“The
best ingredients, the best taste is what we promised our customers and our
employees. This promise is a promise that we should never break, even for one
day. We are bakers. The quality of our flour directly affects the quality of our
bread. If the taste is compromised, Honest John’s is compromised. I realized
this morning that this is what I would regret most. I cannot let my own desires
and excuses destroy Honest John’s and all that it stands for. I will sell some
of my stocks to provide the funds,” I replied.
A storm of silence roared throughout the room
as Director Patterson wracked his brain for a retort. After five minutes, he
slowly rose to his feet and left the room muttering and shaking his head.
One week later, articles appeared in the media called, “A Promise
Is a Promise.” As the information about this incident slowly spread through the
public, the sales grew exponentially and the company’s image was solidified.
Director Patterson was rumored to have quietly apologized to Chairman Johnson
after seeing the sales double in ten days.
David, overall I really enjoyed reading your story because your lesson from the quote you chose was weaved into the story’s plot from start to finish. Even the name of the bakery business that Mr. Johnson ran was connected to the moral of the story-to be honest. Likewise I could really relate to the plot since I work in a bakery, and this kept me intrigued. You incorporated the back and forth mentality that the protagonist experienced very smoothly, without taking away from the story’s plot as well. My main point of constructive criticism would be that after a piece of dialogue has ended, and you want to clarify who said it, use different words other than “said” or “asked” every once and awhile. For example, “snapped” or “inquired” just to spice up the story a bit. Again, great story though.
ReplyDeleteDavid, I enjoyed this story. I liked how you made it so karma worked in a positive way, eliminating the necessity for cheapening the flour in the first place. I felt that it related really well to the epigraph, as Chairman Johnson was very clear in what actually drove the company - his honesty and care for what he did. One thing you could make more clear is what exactly the man who went to the bakery thought of the bread. I know you just used it as a plot device to put in the motto of the company, but it would be nice if you gave a bit more description of what the bread was like. I also agree with Matt about not using "said" or "asked" as much. What do you think would have happened if the decision had not made the papers? Would this decision still be worth it if all the employees were laid off? After all, the employees are as much a part of the business as the bread.
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